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  雅思寫作大作文題目：

  Happiness is considered very important in life.

  Why is it difficult to define?

  What factors are important in achieving happiness?

  雅思寫作大作文范文1：

  In our society, happiness is an crucial element in our daily life. However, happiness is quite difficult to define. Some people think that happiness replies much on the standard of life. Other people are convinced that to define happiness, we should look into the custom of time, area and so on, standard of life is just one of these factors. For my part, I am in favor of this point of view.

  The first reason that can be seen by every person is that time is a very attractive factor for defining happiness. Each period of time has its own costum, and people in different time have different mind of their life. Concequently, the thoughts about happiness are certainly different. For instance, in ancient China, people regarded working in government as their highest goal of life. And in modern Chinese society, youngsters believe that setting their own business or devoting all time in interests are also can be a good way to achieve their life value. Time can decide it a lot.

  Another factor that we must consider is that different nations have their own explaination of happiness. It is can be known easily that each country has their own native culture and history, and for a long time they have owned the certain way to consider about this world. Way know that in eastern countries, people often get married when they are in twenties because they really think it is a happiness in their life. On the contrary, in some western countries, young people usually consider to be married late. So we may make a conclusion that nation custom is also a fator of defining happiness.

  Further more, personal expierence can affect our defination of happiess. For example, an old man who expierenced the war may advocate that peace is happiness. Others, such as a worker or cahsier, may think that retire at home is happiness. What is happiness is just an individual mind.

  And what is important in achieving happiness? I claim that thinking with optimism is quite useful. Use this method, you may find that everything around you is cute and lovely. Apart from that, make a comparation with others is also make you feel happy. When you think your life is boring, you can imagine how people in Iraq run their life. In a word, optimism heart and correct comparation is the most important two factors in realizing happiness.

  雅思寫作大作文范文2：

  Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people. While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships. Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.

  Because people interpret happiness for themselves in so many different ways, it is difficult to give any definition that is true for everyone. However, if there are different kinds of happiness for different individuals that the first step in achieving it would be to have a degree of self-knowledge. A person needs to know who he or she is before being able to know what it is that makes him or her happy.

  Of course, factors such as loving relationships, good health, the skills to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too. But this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be happy.

  Overall, I think an ability to keep clear perspective in life is a more essential factor in achieving happiness. By that I mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives (the welfare of our families, the quality of our relationships, making other people happy, etc.) and what is not (a problem at work, getting annoyed about trivial things, etc.).

  Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be most important for achieving happiness.

  雅思4大作文范文2解析：

  第一段

  Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people.

  開門見山，一個because從句回答了第一個問題“Why is it difficult to define?”,mean 對應define

  While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships.

  While 作連詞，引導狀語從句，主要表時間、對照和讓步三種，此處為對照，含義為“而”

  體會句型多樣性

  Link happiness to sth; happiness lies in sth

  Wealth and material 物質的; emotions and loving personal relationships 情感的

  Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.

  一個yet, 明表轉折，實則為遞進，把上面提的兩點視為世俗的(material world 物質的;relationships with people)和精神的(the spiritual paths),關系還挺復雜的

  句型多變，

  link happiness to sth, happiness lies in sth 變為sth is the way to happiness;

  while+從句 表對照換成 rather than

  遣詞造句能力之高，只能滔滔江水般的敬仰了

  第二段

  Because people interpret happiness for themselves in so many different ways, it is difficult to give any definition that is true for everyone.

  同義表達上段中的主旨第一句，

  Because it means … 換成 because people interpret …

  Happiness is difficult to define 換成 it is difficult to give any definition…

  起到連接上段的作用，不過對語言基本功要求蠻高的

  However, if there are different kinds of happiness for different individuals that the first step in achieving it would be to have a degree of self-knowledge.

  However 轉折，指出該段的主旨句， 回到題目第二問‘what factors’, first step是自知之明(self-knowledge)

  If 從句明表條件，是為因果

  A person needs to know who he or she is before being able to know what it is that makes him or her happy.

  進一步說明什么是self-knowledge, 就是幸福對他代表什么(如金錢，美女，權利等等)

  第三段

  Of course, factors such as loving relationships, good health, the skills to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too.

  一個factors 把第一段的幸福含義又搬出來了，其實幸福定義在很多程度上和幸福影響因素是一碼事，比如我認為有錢就幸福，那么金錢就是幸福的影響因素。

  愛 loving relationships 健康good health 謀生能力the skills to earn a living 平和環境 a peaceful environment 四個因素沒有嚴格的分類

  影響因素+ contribute to + 影響結果，這個句型很重要，如The IELTS score contributes to my application 雅思分數影響我的申請，想必大家能共鳴吧。

  But this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be happy.

  這句有哲理，我就想不出來，健康等是幸福的既非充分又非必要條件

  Cannot 必須這要寫，can not是錯誤的，切記

  第四段

  Overall, I think an ability to keep clear perspective in life is a more essential factor in achieving happiness.

  essential factor繼上一個first step之后，粉墨登場了。提醒一下，英文按邏輯重要性，是把最重要的放在最后，中文中叫“壓軸戲”

  overall 評注性句子狀語，大家還有印象吧

  perspective [c] 觀點，看法 view, opinion 這個詞很常用，也有點高級，記住它

  By that I mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives (the welfare of our families, the quality of our relationships, making other people happy, etc.) and what is not (a problem at work, getting annoyed about trivial things, etc.).

  繼續解釋perspective, by that 把上下句聯系起來，that 指代上句。

  Welfare / wellbeing [u] 幸福

  etc. 等等，拉丁文， 記住末尾那個點別給弄沒了，近義詞 and so on

  第五段

  Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be most important for achieving happiness

  這種寫法叫做先抑后揚

  Self-awareness對應 self-knowledge

  Two factors 對應self-knowledge 或 clear perspective

  還原作者寫作流程

  審題

  先看第一問‘why is it very difficult to define?’這好說，幸福難定義嗎，就是一個人一個答案;再看下文‘what factors are important in achieving happiness?’轉換成‘how can you achieve happiness?’就好理解了，至于到個人如何獲得幸福，首先得有自知之名，最重要的是你怎么看待幸福，記得《讀者》上有一句話：“認為自己最幸福的人，他就是幸福的人;認為自己最聰明的人，其實是最愚蠢的人。”(這句有點扯了，老外應該不看《讀者》)

  框架

  第一段：開門見山，第一段就是“happiness is very difficult to define, because…”,連背景都不介紹了，“Everyone, who spares nothing to pursue his or her own happy life, has yet to reach the consensus over the definition of happiness.”也省去了，省得考官說我是模版。總分模式介紹為什么答案各異，幸福含義分為世俗(secular world)和精神的(spiritual world);有將世俗的分為物質的(material)和人際關系的(relationships)

  第二段：指出how to achieve happiness 第一步first step是self-knowledge。與上段如何過渡得好好考慮考慮，那就說幸福對每個人而言是不同的，但單就某個人而言，他要獲取幸福，就首先得有自知之明，然后再解釋為什么需要自知之明。

  第三段：我還打算談獲取信服最重要的是如何看待人生，這是個壓箱底的好貨，我得先賣個關子，那么這段就談那些常見的影響幸福的因素是其中是既非充分又非必要條件。

  第四段：關子買完了，那就“圖窮匕首現”了，本段總分格式，overall 總體說來，如何看待人生才是獲取幸福的關鍵。然后解釋，分清楚對你來說重要和不重要就可以了。

  第五段：總結一下，自知之明和如何看待人生是獲取幸福的法寶。

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