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  劍6Test4雅思寫作Task2題目：

  Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  劍6Test4雅思寫作Task2范文(一)：

  In modern society, there are two types of lives. Some people like to lead a stable life, without change. Others prefer changing to static. Both kinds of people have their admittedly reasons to support themselves.

  The ones who advocate steady life is comfortable give their points as follows. First of all, long-term of work can provide a reliable source of income. Changing jobs frequently maybe hard for a family to live comfortable. Secondly, movement of home is quite usual. This activity can cost you a great deal of finance to deal with this problem. Besides, shuttling among different kinds of job cannot make you gather the experience of a type of subject. Because you often change the way to face the subjects while changing your jobs. After few decades, you may still a freshman in your job.

  On the contrary, audacious young people like changable life much better than the people above who are interested in steadly life. They are convinced that diversity of life is a treasure of our experience. When we grow more mature in considering questions. What's more, when we change our life styles, we indeed get a quality of how to adapt new life. According to the mental research, people who own adaption ability may hardly feel lonely, and the risk of develop psychologic illness can be dicreased. So changing lives can groom the qualities of youngsters.

  For my part, I would like to share the last point of view. Because I am a young man now, so changing life is a good opportunity for the people like me to join into the society and develop the ability of adapting new life styles.

  劍6Test4雅思寫作Task2范文(二)：

  This model has been prepared by an examiner as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.

  Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations. This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis. This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.

  Those people who believe they have achieved some security by doing the same, familiar things are living in denial. Even when people believe they are resisting change themselves, they cannot stop the world around them from changing. Sooner or later they will find that the familiar jobs no longer exist, or that the ‘safe’ patterns of behaviour are no longer appropriate.

  However, reaching the conclusion that change is inevitable is not the same as assuming that ‘change is always for the better’. Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts for the majority of people. A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their own interests.

  In conclusion, I would say that change can be stimulating and energising for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all change, including that which is imposed on people, does not necessarily have good outcomes.

  題解

  一些人喜歡一輩子都做同樣的事情，避免變化。而其他人認(rèn)為變化總是好事。討論這兩種觀點(diǎn)并提出你的看法。

  參考譯文

  過去半個(gè)世紀(jì)人類生活的變化速度遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超出我們的想象。這一變化是由于科技突破推動(dòng)的，這些科技進(jìn)步幾乎每天都在改變我們看待世界的方式。這意味著變化并不總是個(gè)人的選擇，而是無法回避的生活事實(shí)，而我們需要不斷適應(yīng)以趕上變化。

  那些相信可以通過做同樣的、熟悉的事情來獲得某種安全感的人們是在自欺欺人。即便人們認(rèn)為他們自己在抵制變化，他們也無法阻止周圍世界的變化。他們遲早會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)熟悉的工作不再存在，或者行為的“安全”模式不再合適。

  但是，得出變化不可避免的結(jié)論不等于假設(shè)“變化總會(huì)變得更好”。不幸的是，新事物被推動(dòng)并不總是因?yàn)閷Υ蠖鄶?shù)人有好處。許多革新的目的是為少數(shù)人謀利。這是因?yàn)檎俏覀兩鐣?huì)里有錢和有權(quán)的人們才有能力施加有助于他們自己的利益的變化(比如在工作環(huán)境或者地產(chǎn)發(fā)展方面)。

  總之，我認(rèn)為變化對于那些追逐變化的人們來說是令人興奮，鼓舞人心的，但并不是所有的變化都必定會(huì)有好結(jié)果，這其中也包含施加于人的變化。

  分析

  本文和Test 2一樣，都是Discuss類考題。但本文的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)和論證過程與Test 2的范文有一定區(qū)別。

  Test 2的第一段話純粹交代事實(shí)，而本文的開頭指出變化無處不在，也無法避免，融進(jìn)了作者的觀點(diǎn)，表明避免變化是不可能的。

  第二段話不是分析反方的觀點(diǎn)，而是直接反駁觀點(diǎn)一的理由。第三段話也并沒有論證正方的觀點(diǎn)，而是指出觀點(diǎn)二的理由并不總能立住腳，指出變化并不總是會(huì)變得更好，而只是使得少數(shù)掌握資源的人變得更好，其他人則無法支配變化。

  結(jié)尾總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)，指出變化對于那些主動(dòng)追求變化、能掌控變化的人來說是好的，而對于其他人，尤其是被動(dòng)面對變化的人來說則未必如此。

  總的來說，本文并沒有采用完全平衡式的論證方法，最后表明自己傾向于某種觀點(diǎn)，而是指出兩種觀點(diǎn)在某種程度上的合理之處以及局限所在，從而得出自己的看法。這種寫法比較適合Discuss中兩種觀點(diǎn)都不夠完善，無法完全同意的情況。

  大漠點(diǎn)評：

  題目

  Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

  認(rèn)真看一下這個(gè)題目，狡猾狡猾的，因?yàn)檫@個(gè)話題的兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)不是完全對立的，而是從不同的角度來表述這個(gè)問題：一方面，一些人拒絕改變(拒絕改變是一種結(jié)果，其原因可能是不喜歡改變或是害怕改變，甚至是不知道周圍是變化的);另一方面，一些人認(rèn)為改變經(jīng)常是件好事(認(rèn)為改變是件好事是一種觀點(diǎn)，也就是原因，可能行為是嘗試新鮮事物等)。所以回答這個(gè)問題就不存在中立、傾向或一邊倒，而是把問題一個(gè)個(gè)回答掉。

  第一段：

  Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations.

  介紹背景，老調(diào)重彈

  beyond 詞組經(jīng)常用到: beyond doubt 毋容置疑;

  beyond recognition 無可辨認(rèn);

  beyond expectations 不可想象;

  This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that can changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis.

  這句話說明technological and scientific breakthroughs 產(chǎn)生了兩個(gè)作用 drive this (the pace of change has increased); change the whole way we view the world, 很是狡猾

  This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.

  實(shí)際上開始接觸到第一問題了，not a person option, but an inescapable fact of life的這句很有哲理，而且經(jīng)常用到，大家記住

  第二段

  Those people who believe they have achieved some security by doing the same, familiar things are living in denial.

  直接回答文章的第一問，those people are living in denial

  in denial 介詞短語，拒絕承認(rèn)事實(shí)(refusing to admit the truth or reality of something unpleasant),舉例a patient in denial about his health problems

  Even when people believe they are resisting change themselves, they cannot stop the world around them from changing.

  解釋他們“生活在一種不愿面對真相的狀態(tài)中 live in denial”

  When [conj]: although 盡管，表轉(zhuǎn)折，并非常見的表時(shí)間

  Sooner or later they will find that the familiar jobs no longer exist, or that the ‘safe’ patterns of behavior are no longer appropriate.

  接著解釋 they will find that .. . that

  第三段

  However, reaching the conclusion that change is inevitable is not the same as assuming that ‘change is always for the better’.

  相當(dāng)于把兩問都給否定了，A is not the same as B

  句子用詞的多樣化：

  Reaching the conclusion對應(yīng)assuming

  Evitable 對應(yīng)首段的 inescapable

  Unfortunately, it is not always the case that news things are prompted because they have good impacts for the majority of people.新事物被推動(dòng)并不總是因?yàn)閷Υ蠖鄶?shù)人有好處

  接著解釋，it is not always the case, case指reality 事實(shí)

  解釋原因的著力點(diǎn) the majority of people，就是“是否代表最廣大人們的根本利益”，看看老外學(xué)“三個(gè)代表”真是活學(xué)活用

  A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their interests.這是因?yàn)檎俏覀兩鐣?huì)里有錢和有權(quán)的人們才有能力推動(dòng)符合他們自己的利益的變化(比如在工作環(huán)境或者房地產(chǎn)發(fā)展方面)。

  結(jié)果,It is because +原因，前果后因的因果關(guān)系，大家多學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)習(xí)

  It is people who…that 多層復(fù)合關(guān)系的從句結(jié)構(gòu)需搞清楚

  Such as文章舉例，使其具體化

  Sth is in one’s interest 符合某人的利益， be in the public/national interest

  第四段：

  In conclusion, I would say that change can be stimulating and energizing for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all change, including which is imposed on people, does not necessarily have good outcomes.總之，我認(rèn)為變化對于那些追逐變化的人們來說是令人興奮，鼓舞人心的，但并不是所有的變化都必定會(huì)有好結(jié)果，這其中也包含施加于人的變化。

  I would say標(biāo)志著我的觀點(diǎn)的正式出現(xiàn)，而且把兩個(gè)問題回答強(qiáng)調(diào)一下

  Pursue對應(yīng)第一問中的avoid，not have good outcomes回答了第二問

  審題

  這個(gè)題目很陰險(xiǎn)，不是簡單的是非問題，而是同一個(gè)話題兩種不同觀點(diǎn)，但觀點(diǎn)的側(cè)重點(diǎn)又有所不同，那好辦，就一個(gè)問題一個(gè)問題解決。

  問題一:Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. 世界是變化的，你只能使用變化，而非逃避變化;

  問題二:Others think that change is always a good thing，變化有可能都是好事，有時(shí)也是壞事

  框架

  第一段：這一段談?wù)劚尘埃朐掝}。由于技術(shù)的進(jìn)步，變化無處不在，體現(xiàn)在兩個(gè)方面：人類生活節(jié)奏加快和我們看待世界的看法。這是個(gè)誰也逃避不了的現(xiàn)實(shí)。

  第二段：回答題目的第一問，喜歡做熟悉事情的人是不愿意承認(rèn)事實(shí)，應(yīng)為這是他們逃避不了的現(xiàn)實(shí)，很快他們就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)他們熟悉的工作不存在，或者是安全的行為方式不合適。

  第三段：回答題目的第二問，開頭這句話得將二三兩段聯(lián)系起來，所以就說改變是不可避免的并不等同于改變總是好的。因?yàn)橛行└淖冎环蠙?quán)貴的利益，并不有利于廣大人民群眾。

  第四段：結(jié)尾段，得把兩個(gè)問題聯(lián)系起來，做一個(gè)簡單的歸納。當(dāng)人們主動(dòng)追求變化時(shí)，這個(gè)改變就是令人振奮的，但并不是所有的變化都會(huì)產(chǎn)生積極的后果。

  假如是我?

  看到這個(gè)問題，頭腦里閃出的就是有句歌詞“不是我不明白，是因?yàn)槭澜缱兓臁！币豢催@兩個(gè)問題，還是很好回答的，下面就開始吧。

  第一段：介紹背景，無論是誰，都是這一套

  第二段：回答第一個(gè)問題，拒絕變化的的做法是不可能的。因?yàn)樽兓瘯r(shí)恒定存在的，而且個(gè)人來講不能懼怕變化，積極的面對變化，有時(shí)能使人得到更大的發(fā)展，所以叫做opportunity

  第三段：回答第二個(gè)問題，變化的結(jié)構(gòu)有好有壞，如核技術(shù)的發(fā)明，可以用來發(fā)電，服務(wù)人類，也可用來制造核武器，毀滅人類，所以科學(xué)技術(shù)的變化帶來的雙重影響。

  第四段：再次強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的觀點(diǎn)，既然變化是肯定存在的，我們就必須積極面對，同時(shí)積極的杜絕消極的影響，讓變化造福人類等。

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