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摘要:新航道上海學(xué)校雅思頻小編第一時(shí)間帶來(lái)分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對(duì)各位備考考生們有所幫助,對(duì)雅思寫(xiě)作有所提高!本文是2021年9月4日雅思大作文范文及解析:無(wú)人駕駛汽車(chē)到底好還是不好?
新航道上海學(xué)校雅思頻小編第一時(shí)間帶來(lái)分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對(duì)各位備考考生們有所幫助,對(duì)雅思寫(xiě)作有所提高!本文是2021年9月4日雅思大作文范文及解析:無(wú)人駕駛汽車(chē)到底好還是不好?
2021年9月4雅思大作文題目
It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
本周的考題是《劍橋16》上的一道真題, 之前,我們也發(fā)布過(guò)這道真題的范文,所以,各位考生可要多多關(guān)注劍橋真題啦!
高分范文及解析
01
The automotive industry is witnessing game-changing development, and this revolutionary change lies in the galloping of the driverless technology. As modern as they may look, those driverless vehicles are unexciting and rattling overall. (33 words)
解析
將題目中的cars,buses and trucks概括為automotive industry。在開(kāi)頭段落清晰表明全文的主要觀(guān)點(diǎn),無(wú)人駕駛總體而言令人不安。
automotive 汽車(chē)的
game-changing 變革性的
revolutionary 革命性的
gallop 快速發(fā)展(不及物動(dòng)詞)
rattling 使人不安的
02
Safety issues are the immediate concern. There have been reports about the malfunction of the Artificial Intelligence technology installed on the vehicles. There have also been reports about humans and AI struggling for the control over the steering wheel and the pedals. Those reports make quite a few people suspicious of whether the driverless technology is solid and reliable. As a matter of fact, this hazard is never officially negated, thereby remaining as the biggest drawback of this driverless technology. (80 words)
解析
主體第一段提出無(wú)人駕駛最大的缺點(diǎn),即安全問(wèn)題。安全問(wèn)題里面又涉及兩個(gè)具體的理由。主體段開(kāi)頭一般是比較概括性的句子,不需要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng),一上來(lái)就太長(zhǎng)讀起來(lái)也會(huì)比較費(fèi)勁。
immediate 當(dāng)前的
malfunction 故障(可數(shù)名詞)
install 安裝,安置(及物動(dòng)詞)
struggle 爭(zhēng)奪(不及物動(dòng)詞,通常和for連用,struggle with sb for sth)
quite a few 很多
suspicious 不信任的,持有懷疑態(tài)度的(通常和of連用)
solid 可靠的
hazard 危險(xiǎn)(可數(shù)名詞)
negate 否認(rèn)(及物動(dòng)詞)
03
The deprivation of the fun of driving is another disappointment. The exciting “the sheer fun of driving” slogan may no longer be seen, and completely automatic cars (different from cars with the automatic gear) can hardly be exciting for a considerable number of male drivers, who finally are able to afford a nice car they have always wanted since their youth. What they want is the sense of coolness created by their skillful manipulation of the cars rather than the ease. The hands-off experience is certainly undesirable. (89 words)
解析
主體第二段提出無(wú)人駕駛的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn),中間使用舉例論證。頭尾兩個(gè)短句,中間兩個(gè)長(zhǎng)難句,形成一種錯(cuò)落有致的感覺(jué)。
deprivation 剝奪
disappointment 令人失望的事/人(可數(shù)名詞)
automatic 自動(dòng)的
considerable 很大的
sense of coolness 酷
skillful 熟練的
manipulation 操作
ease舒適,安逸(不可數(shù)名詞)
hands-off 放手的
undesirable 不想要的
04
In fairness, the driverless technology is a groundbreakingadvance. At present, its development and application have afforded convenience and created economic benefits. Cars with this technology are easy to park and alert human drivers to potential collisions. Other vehicles using this technology are being used in more and more settings, such as airport shuttle buses and trains, and accordingly there have been reductions in the labor cost. (89 words)
解析
第三主體段是折中段。之前兩段都是在講無(wú)人駕駛的缺點(diǎn),這一段簡(jiǎn)單題一下優(yōu)點(diǎn),文章看起來(lái)更有批判性。
in fairness 公平地說(shuō)
groundbreaking 革新的
advance 進(jìn)步
application 運(yùn)用(可數(shù)名詞)
afford 提供(及物名詞)
alert 使警惕(及物名詞,常和to連用,alert sb to do sth,alert sb to sth)
collision 碰撞事故(可數(shù)名詞)
05
Overall, the driverless technology will eventually reach a high level of accuracy, precision and sophistication. But now the faults are evident, and the merits are less so. (27 words)
解析
結(jié)尾段概括總結(jié),不需要細(xì)寫(xiě)。再次點(diǎn)明主旨,就目前為止,無(wú)人駕駛的問(wèn)題還是顯而易見(jiàn)的。
accuracy 準(zhǔn)確度(不可數(shù)名詞)
precision 精確度(不可數(shù)名詞)
sophistication 成熟度(不可數(shù)名詞)
fault 缺點(diǎn)(可數(shù)名詞)
evident 顯而易見(jiàn)的
merit 優(yōu)點(diǎn)(可數(shù)名詞)
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