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摘要:雅思寫作是中國考生們的一大頭疼科目,也是難以提高的科目。新航道章躍老師分享小作文的流程圖1:制作工序,希望能對(duì)即將要參加考試的烤鴨們有所幫助!
雅思寫作是中國考生們的一大頭疼科目,也是難以提高的科目。新航道章躍老師分享小作文的流程圖1:制作工序,希望能對(duì)即將要參加考試的烤鴨們有所幫助!
* 非數(shù)據(jù)圖:流程圖
* 類型一:制作工序
* 注意有“循環(huán)”
# Introduction
Shown in the diagram is the procedure of recycling plastic bottles. Overall, the process is moderately complex, consisting of a number of steps. 第一句劃線部分是一個(gè)倒裝形式,當(dāng)成套話記住。提醒注意:動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)由后面的內(nèi)容決定。第二句話陳述圖的宏觀情況。通常說來,就是說一下這個(gè)流程的復(fù)雜程度。
# Body
寫主體段之前,老章的重要提示是:不要傻乎乎的每個(gè)步驟單獨(dú)寫,關(guān)系緊密(或者特別簡單的)的步驟可以合并一起寫。第一句是圖中三個(gè)步驟合并寫: First, used plastic bottles are collected in recycle bins, and then transported to a recycling center – where those bottles are sorted. 第二句就是圖中步驟三和四合并寫:When being sorted, some of them are tossed, and the rest are kept and compressed into blocks. The next step is crushing the blocks into small pieces, and those pieces fall into a tank/basin in which they are washed. At the following step, an apparatus produces plastic pellets from those washed pieces. Then, with heat applied on them, those pellets are melted, and the molten substance is molded and becomes the raw material – fresh and neat plastic. 多樣的句子主語或者句子開頭是語法得分的重點(diǎn)。同時(shí)注意各種狀語、定語、同位語,也是語法得分必備點(diǎn)。當(dāng)然,黃色高亮的部是值得注意和記憶的名詞、動(dòng)詞。
接下來可以分段(分段的原則是關(guān)系的親疏,肯定不要在流程的關(guān)系緊密處分段,而是到了一個(gè)大的節(jié)點(diǎn)處分段)。The new plastic is then either made directly into end products – new bottles and containers, or used for making clothing, pens and recyclable bags. And when those products are no longer needed, some of them go to the recycle bin, and the recycling process starts again.
# Conclusion
In light of all the steps, the cycle is not too complex. 開頭段有了對(duì)于圖的總述,結(jié)尾段有話就寫,沒話就不勉強(qiáng)寫。但是老章還是寫出來予以參考和提示。
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