雅思寫作是中國考生們的一大頭疼科目，也是難以提高的科目。新航道章躍老師分享小作文的流程圖 2：又一制作工序，希望能對即將要參加考試的烤鴨們有所幫助!

  * 非數據圖：【流程圖】

  * 類型一：【制作工序】

  The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar fromsugar cane.

  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

  # Introduction

  Shown in the diagram is the procedure of making sugar from sugar cane. The process, seen in an overall view, is quite complex, consisting of multiple steps in which different machines are used.

  * 第一句話中下劃線的部分是倒裝現象，此時尤其注意動詞的單復數由動詞后的名詞成分(才是真的主語)的單復數決定。

  * 第二句中，動詞的分詞(句中為被動)作插入狀語(表示主句陳述的事情以什么樣的方式、條件、原因發生。這一句中，表方式。)第二句，陳述圖的宏觀情況，拿到內容分的同時拿到語法分(插入狀語、伴隨狀語以及其中的定語從句)

  # Body

  First, it takes a minimum of 12 months and a maximum of 18 for sugar canes to ripen, and grown canes are harvested by eitherlaborersormachinery. The next step is crushing sugar canes into juice by the crushing machine, and then the juice is purified through the limestone filter. 至此，句子的主句已經多樣了。后面還可以更多樣： An evaporator is used at the following step, at which the purified juice becomes syrup as it is heated in the evaporator. 用器械/器皿等作為主語是不容易想到的，這個句子的可學性很高。Then, the syrup goes into the centrifuge, which separates sugar crystals from the syrup. 這一句和之前的一句用到了不一樣的定語從句，也是豐富了作文中的語法現象，得語法分，請留意。Sugar crystals – the semi-product – need to dry and cool in a bucket and become the end product – sugar. 這一句中注意，dry和cool用的是不及物動詞含義。

  * 老章自然是要提醒注意高亮標出的詞匯。

  * 老章的這一段中的語法其實都是簡單語法現象，但是句子讀起來節奏是豐富的，主要得益于句子主語/開頭的多樣和豐富。

  # Conclusion

  In light of those steps, making sugar from sugar cane is a job of complexity, not only because of the many steps but also because of the need to use different pieces of equipment in each step. 這樣的結尾段內容有一定的難度，但是可以學會。首先重申一下圖的全貌，然后就這個圖而言，可以解釋一下是因為步驟多，并且每個步驟都有不一樣的器械。這個套路是可以學會的，要學。