4月22日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 經濟發展帶來的好與壞
2023/10/25 14:25:00來源:新航道作者:新航道
摘要:4月22日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 經濟發展帶來的好與壞
4月22日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 經濟發展帶來的好與壞
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2023年4月22日雅思大作文題目
Many countries aim to improve people’s living standards through economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?(2023/04/22)
范文及解析
Introduction
In some parts of the world, owing to the economic boom, people’s living standard has been largely improved, while such a development also leads to the loss of some significant social values. Personally, the demerits of economic blossom can be offset by its merits.
解 析
本題本質討論經濟發展帶來的好與壞,看似簡單,但是審題需要注意題目信息中出現了兩個限定信息improve people’s living standards 和 social values are lost;這兩個信息點必須要在討論優缺利弊的過程中提及并同時注意對于social values 的正確理解;
? boom n.繁榮;
? offset v.補償,抵銷;
Body 1
Generally,the prosperity of economy contributes positively not only to people’s material in daily lives but the spiritual enrichment. Materially, economic development serves as an indispensable catalyst for creating jobs, mitigating poverty. Accordingly, people can afford better clothing and footwear, enjoy a rich feast of all delicacies, live in spacious houses as well as get the latest electronic gadgets. Meanwhile,thanks to fatter tax collections as the economy recovers, strides can be made by the government in perfecting social welfare system and enhancing infrastructure. Mentally, when citizens get satisfaction in matter life, highly civilized spiritual life has become what people pursue. In the past, never would the general public imagine going to a movie, a concert or a museum, but now, with abundant materials benefited from economic growth, such cultural consumption can be easily accessible.
解 析
經濟發展提升人們的整體生活水平:
(1) 物質上:經濟發展創造工作機會,解決貧困問題,人們能穿更好的衣物,吃更豐富的食物,住更大的房子,享有新潮電子產品;同時享受更好的社會福利,基礎設施建設;
(2) 精神上:物質生活得到滿足,追求精神生活,可以看電影聽演唱會;
? indispensable adj.不可或缺的,必需的;
? catalyst n.誘因,誘導者;
? mitigate v.減輕,緩和;
? a feast of 豐盛的;
? delicacy n.美味,佳肴;
? electronic gadget 數碼產品;電子產品;
? stride n.大步,進展,進步;
? perfect v.完善,使完美;
Body 2
Undeniably, accelerated economic development is a chief culprit for the erosion of some important social values. Primarily, economic development render people more rapacious financially , which occasions excessive exploitation of natural resources with a view to satiating the infinite needs of industrial production. Sadly, many people, when lured by colossal economic incentive, would turn a blind eye to the environmental deterioration. Worse still, economic accumulation would tempt people to seek other irrational excuses to obtain materialistic satisfaction which includes luxuries like fancy handbags and limousines with whopping price. In this case, the weight on economic prosperity and consumerism , a devastating blow to traditional values such as frugality, is bound to shape a money-oriented society .
解 析
也不可否認,經濟發展確實帶來了一定的問題:
(1) 為了發展經濟,大肆消耗自然資源,沒有環保意識;
(2) 當人們一味追求物質,物質社會便會產生,人們也會越來越不看重珍貴的社會價值例如勤儉節約;
? accelerate v.(使)加快,促進;
? culprit n.誘因,誘導者;罪魁禍首;
? infinite adj.無限的,無窮盡的;
? colossal adj.巨大的
? deterioration n.惡化
? accumulation n.積累,堆積;
? whopping adj.巨大的;天大的;異常的;
? limousine n. 豪華轎車
? devastating adj.毀滅性的,極具破壞力的;
? blow n.大風,強風;
? frugality n.節約
? be bound to 勢必會
Conclusion
To recapitulate, notwithstanding the disadvantage economic development gives rise to in disintegrating certain social values, by apportioning resources , the government can strike a balance between economic development and the retention of the cultural identities.
解 析
? disintegrate v.崩潰,瓦解;破裂,粉碎;
? apportion vt.分配,分派;
? strike a balance 公平處理
? retention n.保持,保留;保存,
總結前文信息;重申觀點。