支招小作文(140) | 動態柱圖
2023/11/4 15:48:52來源:新航道作者:新航道
摘要:支招小作文(140) | 動態柱圖
支招小作文(140) | 動態柱圖
分享雅思考試小作文真題范文。每一篇范文都經由專業團隊反復校對,最終外教審查定稿。成功就是日復一日那一點點小小努力的積累。
【2023/ 4/ 29】 The chart below shows the international applicants to universities in one of European countries from four different countries from 2004 to 2008.
題型:動態柱圖
時態:過去時態
主體段分段:
<方法1>:按照國家分段
. China+USA一段
. Japan+Russia一段
<方法2>:按照時間分段 (本篇文章采用此種分段方法)
【開頭段】
The bar chart compares China, Japan, Russia and USA in terms of students who applied to universities in one European country between 2004 and 2008.
【概述段】
It is clear that throughout the given period, this European country attracted less Russian students in comparison with those from the other three countries. Meanwhile, the number of applicants from Japan and USA increased, while that of Chinese candidates showed a downward trend.
***用國家作主語,增加表達靈活性
【Body 1】
In the beginning 2 years, China remained the leading place of origin for international students, although its figure declined noticeably from 28000 to 22000. By contrast, these two years witnessed a remarkable growth in the figures for prospective students from Japan and USA, with the figures falling to 8000 and 14000 respectively. In both years, only roughly 4000 Russian students hoped to study in this given European country for their college years.
***用人作主語,增加表達靈活性
本段思路:[2004~2005年]
. China:最多,下降趨勢
. Japan和USA:顯著上升
. Russia:數量不變
【Body 2】
In the subsequent 2 years, the number of applications from USA soared to nearly 28000, overtaking the figure for Chinese applicants in 2006. Conversely, a marked drop by 800 could be found in the figure for students who came from China. During the same period, there were no significant changes to the number of applications from Japan and Russia.
本段思路:[2006~2007年]
. USA:急劇上升;于2006年和China有交點
. China:顯著下降
. Japan、Russia:基本不變