雅思大作文：女性是否應該參軍?

  表明反對女性參軍的觀點有兩個

  1因為體能的局限性，女性不適合參軍。

  There is no denying that (不可否認的是…) females are physically weaker than their male counterparts (相對應的人).

  In an actual war, for example, it is females' physiological (生理的) limitations that might make it difficult for them to accomplish certain missions or tasks on the battlefield, which will probably jeopardize (危及) their safety and even cause heavy casualties of the whole troop.

  From this perspective, it seems that being a soldier is a highly risky and physically demanding career choice, which is more suitable for males, while jobs like teachers and nurses are considered more feminine.

  2女性需要完成她的家庭角色，生育和撫養孩子，這會影響她們的軍人生涯。

  Females have maternal (母性的) roles to fulfill, that is to say, giving birth to a child, which is likely to affect their career development as a soldier and the like(等等).

  表明同意女性參軍的觀點也有兩個

  1男女平等，所以女性也有參軍的權利。

  There is a growing consensus that (越來越多的共識認為…) females are supposed to enjoy full equality with males, which suggests that women are also entitled to join the army and serve their country.

  2軍隊里有的崗位更適合女性，因為女性相對于男性來說，更耐心，細心，體貼周到。

  It is perfectly reasonable for women to enlist as a soldier, as some jobs in the army can be better suited to females.

  A good case in point (一個很好的例子) is that in the field hospitals, female doctors and nurses may take better care of the wounded (傷員,特指傷兵) and have a greater understanding of what their fellow soldiers are suffering from, because they are more patient, caring and considerate compared with males.

  With their spiritual comfort and emotional support, some of the servicemen may recover from their injuries in no time (很快).

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