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  2016年9月15日雅思大作文題目

  More and more people buy and use their own car. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh its disadvantages for environment?

  新航道名師范文及解析版

  Just 50 years ago, to own a car was quite a luxury, but today, cars have found their way into many households. Statistics show in China alone, there are over 140 million cars running on road every day. While cars have brought about conveniences to their users, they have imposed great pressure on the environment.

  解析：1. 本段用比較方法引出話題，然后用數(shù)據(jù)補充，最后重述題目觀點。這種做法可以讓第一段顯得生動活潑。如果千篇一律地使用如下開頭，則會使文章沒有生機：A. With the development of the society, more and more people buy and use their own car.B. When it comes to the car ownership and use, many people think they are good to the individuals but very bad to the environment.

  這兩種典型的作文開頭法雖然可以萬能，但正因為其萬能，就顯得沒有任何個性，而顯示出作者的個性，是作文得到高分的必需。引用數(shù)據(jù)或者通過比較來引入話題，就顯得更為獨特。

  2. luxury 奢華3. find one’s way to/into... 進入到...... (比簡單的enter顯得更為地道，生動!)4. in China alone...僅僅在中國 (這里的alone與孤獨沒有任何關系，表示“僅僅”)5. impose pressure on... 給......施加了壓力

  Modern city life has made the car an indispensable means of transport. Though most cities today have fairly advanced transportation systems like the bus and metro, they tend to be extremely crowded, especially in rush hours. This means you might come to your office late or miss some important appointments. If you drive your own car, these problems may well be avoided. At the same time, when you plan to take your family for a trip out of town, you may also enjoy the flexibility of when to start off and when to return, rather than spending time waiting for the bus to arrive.

  解析：1. 本段論證汽車給人們生活帶來的便利：第一是公交或地鐵太擁擠，可能因此上班遲到;第二是全家出去旅游時更靈活。2. indispensable 不可或缺的3. means of transport / transportation 交通運輸工具4. rush hours (上下班)高峰期5. flexibility 靈活性

  However, the increased use of cars has caused serious consequences for our environment. Many experts, for instance, attributes the worsening air quality in big cities tothe cars’ exhaust gas emission and the dust that rises after them. This accusation is perhaps well-grounded if you make a little comparison between the air quality 50 years ago and that now. In addition to the waste gas and dust, cars also make unbearable noises, which is a headache to all city dwellers. Just imagine a time you are shocked awake from your cozy dream by the sharp braking screech of a car passing by your house!

  1. 本段討論汽車對環(huán)境的影響，一是造成了空氣質(zhì)量下降，二是造成了很多噪音。本段最后一句也是一個個性表達的范例!2. consequences 后果3. attribute...to... 將......歸因于......4. exhaust gas emission 尾氣釋放5. well-grounded 有依據(jù)的6. city dweller 城市居民7. screech 尖叫聲

  In my view, it is unrealistic for the government to put a ban on the car ownership or use since the cars have been so important in our daily life, yet we cannot overlook the negative effects they have on the environment. To get out of this dilemma, to my mind, there are twooptions, the first being to develop car technology and produce cars that burn less fuel and the second, encourage the car owners to use public transportation whenever possible.

  1. 本段表達自己的觀點，提出汽車和環(huán)境都需要，并因此提出了兩個選擇方案：一是設計耗油少的汽車，二是鼓勵大家盡量選坐公共交通。2. unrealistic 不現(xiàn)實的3. overlook 忽視4. dilemma 困境5. option 選擇6. ...there are two options, the first being to develop car technology... 該句后半部分是獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，因此用being，而不能用is。在有把握的前提下，偶爾使用一下這種高端句型，有可能給考官留下好印象。如果沒有把握，就要老老實實地寫：...there are two options. The first one is to develop car technology...

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