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  Nowadays, children spend a lot of time watching TV and playing computer games.Some people believe this has negative effects on children's mental abilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  解析&審題

  連續(xù)兩周都在圍繞“孩子”來命題了。上周要求大家討論的是新技術(shù)改變了孩子們課余活動方式，而本周則討論看很多電視和打很多游戲?qū)⒆有闹前l(fā)展的影響。本題與2015年10月24日考題比較接近。

  題目中有三個關(guān)鍵詞：children, watch TV / play computer games, mental abilities. 我們的討論需要圍繞這三個關(guān)鍵詞：必須討論孩子(不能大學(xué)生或成人)，必須討論看電視/打游戲(不是其他活動)，心智發(fā)展(不能討論對身體的影響)。

  在這三個關(guān)鍵詞中，可能將mental abilities(心智能力)具體討論下去對某些同學(xué)來說存在一定困難。其實，心智能力是非常寬泛的，涉及與我們心理相關(guān)的所有能力，比如想象能力、學(xué)習(xí)能力、解決問題的能力、邏輯思考、情感體驗?zāi)芰Γ鹊取Ｖ灰黄屏藢Α靶闹悄芰Α钡睦斫猓绢}就比較容易寫作了。比如，我們可以說看電視/打游戲可能有助于我們的想象能力和解決問題的能力，但對我們的學(xué)習(xí)能力和邏輯思維能力則可能有害。這樣，我們就可以在本題的寫作中體現(xiàn)出雅思考試中相當重要的“批判思維”的技巧了。

  老師筆記

  01

  What effects do watching TV and playing computer games have on children’s mental abilities? The answer to this question, to my mind, is that there are potential dangers as well as benefits.

  看電視和玩電腦游戲?qū)⒆拥男闹悄芰τ惺裁从绊?在我看來，這個問題的答案是，既有潛在的危險，也有好處。

  解析

  (1) 本段提出問題，并給出自己的觀點。這種開頭開門見山，直擊主題，是雅思寫作中廣泛使用的一種開頭法。

  (2) mental abilities 心智能力(包含很廣，包括思維能力，推理能力，問題解決能力，情感能力等)

  (3) to my mind 在我看來，我認為

  (4) potential 潛在的

  02

  Parents tend to focus more on the risks of their children spending a great deal of time in front of the screen. To begin with, watching TV is addictive and can result in brain damage, which may impair children’s mental power to learn. It has been scientifically proved that prolonged TV viewing can decrease children’s mental abilities to concentrate, and increase the chances of brain disorders. Likewise, most parents see computer games as a negative influence or simply as an evil temptation harmful to children’s mental abilities. Overdoing computer games, for example, might affect children’s ability to understand the real world. Taken together, both watching TV and playing computer games excessively are believed to be bad for children’s mental development.

  父母傾向于更多地關(guān)注孩子在屏幕前花費大量時間的風險。首先，看電視會使人上癮，會導(dǎo)致腦損傷，這可能損害孩子的學(xué)習(xí)能力。科學(xué)證明，長時間看電視可以降低孩子集中注意力的能力，增加大腦疾病的機會。同樣，大多數(shù)父母認為電腦游戲是消極的影響，或者是對孩子的心智能力有害的邪惡誘惑。例如，過多的電腦游戲可能會影響孩子們了解現(xiàn)實世界的能力。綜上所述，看電視和玩電腦游戲都被認為對孩子的心智發(fā)展有害。

  解析

  (1) 本段論述看電視和打游戲?qū)⒆有闹悄芰Πl(fā)展的壞處：影響學(xué)習(xí)能力和理解現(xiàn)實的能力。

  (2) tend to do...... 傾向于做......

  (3) addictive 使上癮的

  (4) result in 導(dǎo)致

  (5) impair 損害

  (6) prolonged 長時間的

  (7) temptation 誘惑

  (8) excessively 過多地

  03

  However, it does not mean children should completely avoid watching TV or playing computer games. In the case of watching TV, with good content, it can be educational and informative, like good food to feed children’s hungry brain. Studies show that children who watch selected (non-violent) TV programs do better in reading and math tests than those who do not. Further, playing games can give children’s brain a real workout because the skills required to win involve high-level mental abilities which are not even taught at school.

  然而，這并不意味著孩子們應(yīng)該完全避免看電視或玩電腦游戲。就看電視而言，內(nèi)容好的電視可以是教育性和知識性的，就像美食一樣來喂養(yǎng)孩子們饑餓的大腦。研究表明，看精選(非暴力)電視節(jié)目的孩子們在閱讀和數(shù)學(xué)測試方面比那些不看的孩子表現(xiàn)更好。此外，玩游戲可以給孩子兒童的大腦一種真正的鍛煉，因為獲勝所需的技能涉及到高水平心智，而這些能力甚至在學(xué)校里都沒有教過。

  解析

  (1)本段討論看電視和打游戲?qū)⒆有闹前l(fā)展的好處：閱讀和數(shù)學(xué)能力;更多高層次心智能力的鍛煉機會。

  (2)in the case of 就......而言

  (3)informative 有信息量的

  (4)workout 鍛煉;練習(xí)

  (5)involve 涉及;包含

  04

  To sum up, watching TV or playing computer games, like many things, can be both helpful and harmful to children. The issue, then, is not whether children should be allowed to watch TV or play computer games, but how parents should monitor their children’s screen hours.

  總之，看電視或玩電腦游戲，就像很多事情一樣，對孩子們來說是有益的，也是有害的。因此，問題不在于是否應(yīng)該允許孩子看電視或玩電腦游戲，而是家長應(yīng)該如何監(jiān)控孩子的屏幕時間。

  解析

  (1)本段是結(jié)論，以另一種方式重申自己的觀點。

  (2)to sum up 總之

  (3)issue 問題

  (4)monitor 監(jiān)控

  高分參考范文

  What effects do watching TV and playing computer games have on children's mental abilities? The answer to this question, to my mind,is that there are potential dangers as well as benefits.

  Parents tend to focus more on the risks of their children spending a great deal of time in front of the screen. To begin with, watching TV is addictive and can result in brain damage, which may impair children’s mental power to learn. It has been scientifically proved that prolonged TV viewing can decrease children’s mental abilities to concentrate, and increase the chances of brain disorders. Likewise, most parents see computer games as a negative influence or simply as an evil temptation harmful to children’s mental abilities. Overdoing computer games, for example, might affect children’s ability to understand the real world. Taken together, both watching TV and playing computer games excessively are believed to be bad for children’s mental development.

  However,it does not mean children should completely avoid watching TV or playing computer games. In the case of watching TV, with good content, it can be educational and informative, like good food to feed children's hungry brain. Studies show that children who watch selected (non-violent) TV programs do better in reading and math tests than those who do not. Further, playing games can give children's brain a real workout because the skills required to win involve high-level mental abilities which are not even taught at school.

  To sum up, watching TV or playing computer games,like many things, can be both helpful and harmful to children.The issue, then, is not whether children should be allowed to watch TV or play computer games, but how parents should monitor their children's screen hours.

  建議背誦的句子

  1. Parents tend to focus more on the risks of their children spending a great deal of time in front of the screen.

  父母傾向于更多地關(guān)注孩子在屏幕前花費大量時間的風險。

  2. It has been scientifically proved that prolonged TV viewing can decrease children's mental abilities to concentrate, and increase the chances of brain disorders.

  科學(xué)證明，長時間看電視可以降低孩子集中注意力的能力，增加大腦疾病的機會。

  3. In the case of watching TV, with good content,it can be educational and informative, like good food to feed children’s hungry brain.

  就看電視而言，內(nèi)容好的電視可以是教育性和知識性的，就像美食一樣來喂養(yǎng)孩子們饑餓的大腦。

  4. Playing games can give children's brain a real workout because the skills required to win involve high-level mental abilities which are not even taught at school.

  玩游戲可以給孩子兒童的大腦一種真正的鍛煉，因為獲勝所需的技能涉及到高水平心智，而這些能力甚至在學(xué)校里都沒有教過。

  5. The issue, then, is not whether children should be allowed to watch TV or play computer games, but how parents should monitor their children’s screen hours.

  因此，問題不在于是否應(yīng)該允許孩子看電視或玩電腦游戲，而是家長應(yīng)該如何監(jiān)控孩子的屏幕時間。

  以上就是小編給大家分享的雅思 考試寫作機經(jīng)范文匯總，通過范文可以有效幫助大家備考雅思寫作考試。

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