上海新航道名師獨(dú)家解析2016年9月3日雅思寫作Task2題目：

  Some people think having more TV channels is good because they will have more choices. While other people think too many TV channels only lead to a lot of poor quality TV programs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  9月3日雅思寫作范文 ：第一段

  With the development of digital technology come the numerous TV channels that have mushroomed into our life. Statistics show globally there are more than 15,000 different TV channels, and in China alone, the number is 1300! Many people do not like this development, suspecting the rapid increase of channel number will only lead to mediocrity in quality. While this suspicion may contain a grain of truth, I still believe in more channels mainly for two reasons.

  新航道名師解析：第一段

  開頭段，先引出電視頻道越來(lái)越多這一現(xiàn)象，然后重述題目的觀點(diǎn)，最后提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

  在描述現(xiàn)象時(shí)，唐老師引用了數(shù)據(jù)，并有statistics show...來(lái)引出數(shù)據(jù)。

  mushroom本來(lái)是“蘑菇”，也可以用作動(dòng)詞，像蘑菇一樣迅速生長(zhǎng)。

  ...the rapid increase of channel number will only lead to mediocrity in quality是對(duì)題目原句...too many TV channels only lead to a lot of poor quality TV programs的重新表述。Mediocrity 是“低劣，一般”的意思。

  ...may contain a grain of truth, 意思為“......也許有一些道理”。多數(shù)烤鴨可能都會(huì)使用“...is true / reasonable in some ways / aspects / respects” 這樣的句型。

  9月3日雅思寫作范文 -第二段

  Obviously, more channels provide TV viewers with more opportunities to enjoy their own favorite programmes. As far as I know, some TV viewers are more interested than others in educational programmes which give them knowledge in specialised fields. At the same time, there are some viewers who would like to be entertained and others who would watch TV as a window to the outside world. To cater to the tastes of different viewers, it is important that we have various channels, such as news, music, movies, sports and travel, among others. Undoubtedly, when more and more channels spring up, there may be some poor quality channels, but with many channels competing for viewers, chances are that we can enjoy programmes of higher quality.

  新航道名師解析：第二段

  本段論證贊同多頻道的第一個(gè)理由：可以欣賞更多節(jié)目。很顯然，這里需要講不同觀眾有不同的需要。唐老師在寫作時(shí)，注意變換了不同的句型，如some TV viewers are more interested in ...; there are some viewers who would like to...

  Cater to... 迎合;照顧

  Chances are that... 有可能。烤鴨們都會(huì)it is possible that...; it is likely that...

  9月3日雅思寫作范文-第三段

  More importantly, more channels give viewers the freedom of choice. When offered a great variety of TV channels, one sitting in front of TV may have some difficulty deciding what to watch, yet this feeling is more a “sweet” bitterness, just like what we experience when we go into a supermarket and are at a loss about our choices. If you do not think much of this freedom, just try to imagine what you would feel when you could only watch one channel and one programme, even if it were the best one in the world!

  新航道名師解析：第三段

  本段論證支持多頻道的第二條理由：選擇自由。利用比較和假設(shè)兩種方法來(lái)論證選擇自由的重要性。

  When offered a great variety of TV channels, one sitting in front of TV may have some difficulty deciding... 這是一個(gè)過去分詞短語(yǔ)前置做狀語(yǔ)，更一般的句型是這樣的：When one is offered a great variety of TV channels, he/she sitting in front of TV may...

  Have some difficulty doing... 做......有些困難

  9月3日雅思寫作范文-第四段

  To conclude, more channels can give TV viewers more opportunities and freedom of choice, which are far more important than anything else, including the possible drop of quality of some TV programmes.

  新航道名師解析：第四段

  本段是結(jié)論段，總結(jié)了前文的理由，重述自己的觀點(diǎn)。

  注意唐老師在行文上如何避免與前文重復(fù)。