上海新航道名師獨家解析-2016年8月27日雅思寫作大作文范文及解析

  8月27日雅思寫作大作文題目：

  Some people think it is more important to plant trees in open areas in towns and cities than to provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  8月27日雅思寫作范文：第一段

  Many people suggest that there should be more trees rather than houses in the open areas of cities and towns. While this suggestion is reasonable in many cases, it is not so in others.

  8月27日雅思寫作范文解析：

  開頭段，直接重述題目觀點，然后給出自己的觀點。注意體會唐老師如何對題目進行重新表述。在雅思考試中，如果全文照抄題目原話，容易給考官一個印象，認為你不具備改寫能力。

  while 這個詞尤其靈活，請各位烤鴨務必掌握其細微的用法。

  8月27日雅思寫作范文：第二段

  For a city or town which has already had sufficient supply of housing, planting trees in the open areas is certainly a good idea.With green trees covering the streets, the city look much more beautiful. That is why I prefer living in southern cities where green trees are everywhere even in winter to living in northern cities. At the same time, more trees make the city air cleaner, because as we all know, trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, which is beneficial to the health of the city dwellers.Statistics show that people living in a tree-covered city enjoy much higher life expectancy than those living within the concrete walls of tall buildings.

  8月27日雅思寫作范文解析：

  本段講種樹在什么情況下是合理的，以及為什么要種樹。這里提出了兩個理由：一，種樹可以讓城鎮更美麗;二，種樹可以使人們身體更健康。

  With green trees covering the streets = if green trees cover the streets = if the streets are covered by green trees. 這是一種很地道的獨立結構，這里用來替換過度使用的if從句。練習用with引導的獨立結構，可以豐富我們的句式。

  Statistics show that...統計數據表明......

  8月27日雅思寫作范文：第三段

  Yet, it would be stupid to ask people to plant trees in a city or town where they can not find enough houses to live in. Planting trees is undoubtedly more environmentally friendly, but getting a shelter to keep off rain and snow is always the top concern for all people. 30 years ago, in many cities and towns in China, for example, many houses were built as the urbanisation attracted a large number of people into the city. People did not focus on planting trees back then, not that they did not understand the importance of a healthy environment, but that they found they should put survival at the top of their agenda.

  8月27日雅思寫作范文解析：

  本段講在某些情況下，比如當城鎮居民無樓可住的時候，種樹并不是人們的最佳選擇。然后用中國30年的情況作為例證。

  ...not that..., but that... 不是因為，而是因為

  Put...at the top of agenda 把......置于議程之首;最先考慮......

  8月27日雅思寫作范文：第四段

  There is no definite answer, therefore, to the question whether we should plant trees or build houses in the open areas of a city, because the answer is dependent on how developed the city is. In a highly developed city, planting trees is always a better choice, yet in a less developed city, houses are more needed than trees.

  8月27日雅思寫作范文解析：

  結論段：到底該種樹還是建房取決于城市的發展程度。在結論段，我們也要避免與前面部分表達重復。

  ... Is dependent on... = depend on... 取決于......

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