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  托福獨(dú)立寫作題目：

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Government is not doing enough work to educate people the importance of nutrition and healthy eating.

  寫作范文：

  【立場(chǎng)：Agree】

  Introduction：不宜太長(zhǎng)，信息推進(jìn)要快，要在第一句話就切入主題。

  An individual’s dietary choice and dining timetable matter to the person’s physical wellness and general wellbeing. As the choice is made, it may be made by the individual alone or under the government’s guidance. In most cases, the choice is personal and probably irresponsible, and the authority does not intervene adequately.

  For starters, there are two reasons that may be no brainers. Frist, few public service ads about healthful eating are seen. 【措辭技巧：不在動(dòng)詞處否定;文脈技巧：段落中心句短小，當(dāng)?shù)览硪呀?jīng)到了底層的時(shí)候，就直接“例證”】 For example, seldom do people find enough ads that promote healthy eating, when they walk in the streets, turn on the TV or unfold a newspaper. 【措辭技巧：兩個(gè)句子都是“否定前置”，突出否定意】 【論證技巧：正說(shuō)反說(shuō)】Instead, they are bombarded with countless commercials of junk food, such as chips, biscuits, and instant noodles. 【論證技巧：當(dāng)一個(gè)道理已經(jīng)講到位的時(shí)候，不要硬湊篇幅】 Second, the subject that teach humans’ nutritional need is absent in the public schools’ curriculum. 【措辭技巧：不在動(dòng)詞處否定，而是選用了有否定含義的形容詞】 Since the curriculum is designed by the government, the absence should be attributed to the government’s negligence.

  There is another reason that may be controversial. Our government fails to legally inform our fellow citizens of the need for proper eating. The reality is that most countries do not have laws that tell the citizens to eat properly. 【論證技巧：類比論證，建立prior knowledge為參照物】However, just as smoking can be outlawed, having a nutritious and balanced diet can be legally required. Some would oppose this idea for the reason that the law would be a nanny-state legislation that interferes with people’s lifestyle choice. Nevertheless, when citizens are unconscious of their unhealthy diet or knowingly irresponsible in eating, why do we question the legitimacy of the administration’s intent to prohibit of a lifestyle that incurs medical bills that are too massive to be redeemed? 【措辭技巧：反問句】

  In conclusion, government is not doing its job adequately in educating people the importance of nutrition and healthful eating. It【it的虛指】would be enough, if government did enough publicity about healthy eating, incorporated the knowledge about nutrition into the school curriculum, or mandated a healthy diet.

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