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  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  Scientific discoveries should be shared by all countries worldwide, and no government should keep them secret.

  寫作范文

  Introduction

  【心里確定好立場，創造“畫面”:現實情景、歷史事實、個人軼事，為立場做鋪墊】→ In astronomy, a star may be discovered, and the discovery may be reported to the world as it is confirmed. In medicine, a treating chemical may be found, and the finding may be made known to all. ← 【故意兩個句子的句式相同】 Unfortunately ,← 【故意沒有用however，但是表達了轉折意義，同時也表達了作者的立場：“不分享是不幸的”】it is not unlikely that scientific discoveries are withheld. As this may create profits for those governments that keep the finds in their private possession, this is a loss for the entire humanity. ← 【進一步明確立場，并且在前半句暗示了讓步】

  Body

  【先對應開頭段落里最后一句話所表達的讓步】→ It makes sense that the government wants to possess the discovery exclusively, since the economic gains may be so immense that it cannot afford to share the secret. Without fully appreciating the probable tremendous economic appeal, it may be unfair to condemn this consideration. In addition, a secret may be kept for other reasons, for example, homeland security and military advantage. However, countries should actually adopt a rather global view. ←【經典的短句法】 One country alone may not be able to fully utilize the discovery on the economic level, and some discoveries may play a bigger role: they may contribute to world peace, beyond regional security. ← 【立論的thesis statement】

  The first instance where shared information can create greater benefits is that one country's astronomical discovery may help the one country's agrarian economy to generate profits. However, the profits may soon reach the limit since the discovery is used only locally. Instead, if the information is known and utilized worldwide, the world's agriculture may develop as a result of all countries' synergy, and even the smallest divided portion of the profits generated may be greater than the profits exclusively owned by the one country. 【定語的組織是難點：斜體下劃線的部分】

  Second, a finding in physics may be used for the discoverer country to make super weapons. Armed by the weapons, the nation seems secure and safe. However, history has shown the opposite. ←【經典的短句法】 Having the advantage however lead to no peace but war, which threatens every country regardless of the military strength. Instead, the finding should be shared, and the advantage, the hazard, is eliminated, and a balance may be maintained. Peace is more likely, therefore.

  Conclusion

  To see things in perspective, when a principle, an equation or a chemical is discovered, it should be celebrated by the entire humanity. Borders should not matter. ←【經典的短句法】

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