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  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  The most important problems of our society can be solved during our lifetime.

  寫作范文：

  Personally, I do not think that many of the struggles or sufferings【頭韻用詞】of human beings can be solved before I can no longer breathe.Instead, I believe that they will persist or seem to be solved but actually appear repeatedly with a deceptive new packaging yet unchanged nature. 【套路之“反問句”：“強(qiáng)詞奪理”給出觀點(diǎn)】Why do I hold such a pessimistic【正負(fù)評(píng)價(jià)詞暗示觀點(diǎn)】view? 【措辭技巧: rhetorical question】

  The first reason is based on the history. Many of the problems we are dealing with have long been difficulties since they first bothered us in the past. 【論證：舉例法】For example, people can still die young of illness.【順承銜接】At this point, the opponents may find counterexamples that experts have been finding cures for more and more diseases that used to be lethal and are able to effectively intervene 【干預(yù)(良性的)-正評(píng)價(jià)】before the conditions take lives.【轉(zhuǎn)折-拉回觀點(diǎn)】However, while increasing numbers of patients are cured, even more unprecedented fatal viruses and pathological changes are also discovered. The irrefutable fact is that there will always be conditions that can take one’s life in the one’s prime. 【接下來(lái)，短句舒緩一下節(jié)奏】 Another example is crime. Has it ever stopped? 【措辭技巧: rhetorical question】 As a matter of fact, not only does【倒裝】it remain stubborn, it also varies [vary] through time. To name a few specific cases, fraud has always been a problem, and corruption has never been eliminated.

  The other major reason is the flaws of humanity. It is fair to believe that many of our deficiencies can never be fixed, and as a result, the most important problems, 【非限定從句舒緩一下語(yǔ)流】 which are the result of those defects, can never be fixed. 【前方高能句式：假設(shè)論證的排比用法，建議背誦】 + 【論證：假設(shè)法】 If we humans were able to restrain our greed, there would be no more fraud or corruption. If we humans were able to quit our gluttony, there may be reduced incidence of illness. If we humans were able to curb our temper[curb one’s temper], there would be less violence. Unfortunately, none of the conditionals have ever been and could never be real cases, and consequently, few of the many problems that we struggle with could be solved.

  Admittedly, it is fair for any optimistic individual【不定式的平行現(xiàn)象】to stand opposite me, to rebut my idea and to argue otherwise. They may be seeing a small picture in which a number of specific problems are solved indeed and therefore seeing only the sunlight, however. I believe that I see the greater picture.

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