上海新航道托福培訓小編特別整理了首場考試的詳情，這次給大家帶來了寫的關于2020年9月19日托福獨立寫作范文及解析。希望幫助考生對照文本更好的研究真題，充分備考，爭取理想成績，實現留學夢想。

  9月19日托福獨立寫作題目

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  People who cannot accept criticism will not succeed working in team.

  題目拆解：

  本題是一個雙重否定等于肯定的絕對題， 即只有接受批評才能在團體中獲得成功。因此破題應該從意見采納與團隊合作進行切入。因此采用兩個基本角度：融入群體與改善自己。

  Introduction

  Teamwork in which people could gather to discuss or resolve tasks either in school or workplace is quite common. In order to maintain effective group work, listening to others’ words including negative ones is the necessity and determinant for success.【這里的開頭主要做兩件事：引入話題+陳述觀點】

  Body

  First of all, hardly can an overconfident individual get involved in the group. In order to inspire more sparkles, people work in teams to ensure the collision of ideas. In other words, the more thoughts members have, the more conflicts happen among them. In this case, being endurable to negative comment from partners is a prerequisite in getting along with others in the team.【一到兩句話把中心句說理說明白】Take my colleague Allen as an example. He graduated from a prestigious university with honorary degree, which contributed to his arrogance towards other’s feedback. Every time when the group meeting was held, he presented the idea in a supercilious way. Worse, if his ideas are pointed out to be impractical, instead of embracing the comment, he will be indignant and even brutally arguing with other team members. After several times, he was excluded from the team for the obstacle he caused for the collaboration in the whole project.【舉個貼切的例子比重復說理有說服力得多】

  True, blunt criticism hurts. It is never comfortable for one to peacefully accept the blame especially when the proposal is elaborated. A strong sense of failure would be triggered and predominant for the presenter, but what we should envisage is that this is the only way for any successful group work where along with the praise there must be criticism. Unlike being frustrated, we are ought to have an open mind for all possible evaluation. Or the work may be stuck due to the slide into a bad feeling even distrust, which will greatly impede group work. 【小做個讓步反向論證】

  Instead, the words even in blaming tone may all derive from the sincere to forge the final success. One of the previous projects I collaborated with my classmates can best exemplify this. In order to get an A for our teamwork, they would spare no effort but gave me the straightforward comment. At first, I felt very upset and thought they must be on purpose until I followed their words to make a change. Things were getting much better and the final assessment was excellent for all of us. It is the blunt comment from my teams that promotes the healthy relationship between us, as well as the promising result.【再跟進一個正面論述的例子補充】

  Ending

  In a nutshell, if one were unable to be open-minded to all feedback from teammates, the final success would be unable to achieve. Only with an inclusive attitude can people get the success through the group.【一到兩句話總結全文】