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  10月17日托福獨(dú)立寫作

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  Economy growth should not be slowed down by concerns about environment.

  解題：仍然是一道常規(guī)的絕對(duì)題，問(wèn)到了環(huán)境與經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的關(guān)系。寬泛的話題下同學(xué)們需要注意寫作中避免陳述過(guò)于寬泛，盡量讓話題更深入。

  Introduction

  Most countries seem to have indulgedin accelerating their economy under the fierce global competition. What we never imagine is that it is the nature that finally pays the price sometimes worsen than the prediction. To be sustainable for future, we human beings should not sacrifice the environment for private profit.

  這里的開頭需要注意背景的描述不需要多，一兩句就可以切入主題。

  Body

  The first thing should be emphasized is the irreversibility of ecosystem. With such a large diversity of animals and plants, the system is fragile and vulnerable, which means any effect imposed to it will be too detrimental to bear. Now, let’s turn to what human beings have done. We pour the sewage to the river where fishes and aquatic plants lived; we emit the waste gas to the air which we need to breath in everyday; we invade the remote area that used to be wild animals’ habitats.【抽象話題下可以采用復(fù)合例子進(jìn)行說(shuō)明】All of these only orient to human being’s profit without any consideration for the potential risks. Well, to be more precise, it has turned into the actual life threats for every aspect of the living environment. The whole world has been trapped by deteriorated surrounding; not only are animals suffering from the continuous extinction, but also human beings are struggling with the environment-related diseases. Isn’t it horrible? We, finally, become the one to swallow the bitter pill.

  先陳述自然的脆弱性及不可逆性

  Also, prospering the economy never has an end. Some opponents take inferior situation of the country as an excuse for restless exploiting where we live. However, how to define the success of being developed? For example, China used to be a country with extremely low productivity. In order not to be lagged behind, we spared no effort to dig our land for available resource and thus the last generation has already been surrounded by poor environment. Today, after narrowing the gap with other developed countries, our government is planning the further goal.【給一個(gè)時(shí)間跨度的例子說(shuō)明發(fā)展的無(wú)限性】There is no denying that the heavily damaged would still be depended on for generating more for the sake of human’s endless desire.

  從經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的角度切入陳述不必要性

  In a nutshell, I am not declaring that the environment and economic development cannot coexist but the degree should be carefully concerned.

  結(jié)尾段一筆帶過(guò)強(qiáng)化觀點(diǎn)