上海新航道托福培訓小編特別整理了首場考試的詳情，這次給大家帶來了寫的關于2020年10月24日托福獨立寫作范文及解析。希望幫助考生對照文本更好的研究真題，充分備考，爭取理想成績，實現留學夢想。

  題目

  When you’re interested in a company or position, which of the following do you think is the best way to successfully find a job?

  1. Ask as many friends as possible for job vacancy information both in person and through social media

  2. Send a letter about yourself to the company you want to work for

  3. Search for job advertisements from different media, like newspaper and magazine

  解題思路：本題重復了2019年10月26日的真題，但是有所不同的是每一個選項都增加了更詳細的信息描述。這也是下半年托福寫作的特征，對同學們的審題及寫作都增加了一定的難度，所以一定要注意在寫作中落實觀點。

  Introduction

  Under such a competitive society in every aspect, people are desperate to out-compete the counterparts especially for a job. Compared with the common way either turning to acquaintance or looking for wanting advertisements, directly sending a personal statement is more pragmatic.

  ? 開頭段：介紹背景信息之后，稍微注意對題目信息的同意替換避免重復

  Body

  Initially, friends or relatives are unfavorable source for job searching. The main reason is because the information they provide is restricted to their own fields and hardly can the desired kind be included.【一兩句解釋中心句的觀點】 For example, a friend working in financial company may be competent enough to offer me the job-related news from her base. If my dream were about getting into the school as an English teacher, he or she would have nothing helpful for me. Although she may try all her social network to get something useful, it should be acknowledged that this is only to a very lean extent. More specifically, the message is actually second-hand, unreliable due to the several rounds of conveyance.【重點給出符合中心論點的例子】

  ? 先否定其中一個不選項

  Instead, writing a letter with clear objects is more ideal for getting the work. Unlike that from friends, no ambiguous information would emerge in the contact to the company since every piece is reliable and authentic. Moreover, it is not a one-way communication; the sparkling points of the job applicants are able to be included in the letter as a way to promote oneself. The detailed and targeted introduction can impress the employers, which enables a higher opportunity when deciding the candidates.【注意這里的說理進行了一個遞進】 I have successfully got the job of sales manager via bravely sending the emails to one leading company. The interviewer, later, explained why he chose me to do the job and this all thanks to the letter in which my merits are meticulously displayed. This, greatly, outshines me from other applicants.【同樣與上一段進行對稱給出另一個例子】

  ? 上下兩段進行了選項間的比較

  Also, letters avoid the insidious risks emerging in advertisements. Prevalent as job posts are, they, to a large extent, are prone to modify their positions in offered salary or required duty. Sometimes, this information will even be exaggerated in order to appeal to and lure more job hunters. Worse, the wrongdoers would take advantage of this to fraud the innocent graduates. There are so many cases about scandals resulting from fake description of job vacancy, which is seldom seen in mailing.【之前的例子足夠了，這里避免重復只用說理】

  ? 再利用上一段的信息與這一段進行第二次比較

  Ending

  In a nutshell, ways may vary in finding a get or getting the position but the most efficient one is only through mailing with ideal company.

  ? 點明主題明確觀點