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  2020年12月2日托福獨(dú)立寫作題目

  When choosing a place for living, which factor is the most important one for you?

  A: Living in an area that is not expensive

  B: Living close to relatives

  C: Living in an area with many shops and restaurants (本文的選擇)

  范文解析

  To decide where to live, one may prioritize proximity to family or houses prices and living expenses. In my opinion, neither of the two factors is more important than a decent collection of shops and restaurant.

  ☆ 開頭段信息進(jìn)展要快：第一句介紹兩個被拋棄的選項(xiàng);第二句先否定這兩個選項(xiàng)，再介紹另一個方式同時表達(dá)立場。

  It would be redundant to emphasize the importance of affordability in terms of choosing a place for living. With soaring living expenses and house prices taken into consideration, it seems fair to reside in an area with a low cost of living. However, one should be aware that such areas, usually locating on the edge of town, always come with unbearable commuting times and few public transportation options. 【分詞做狀語】Spending longer time waiting for the train or tram or travelling between home and workplaces, one may 【否定副詞】barely make time for their families or take a good rest, thus feeling overwhelmed or frustrated. 【對比論證的開始】This is where an area with a wide selection of shops and restaurants has an edge that it tends to be conveniently located in the city center, where the public transportation options are various, and the frequency is higher. In this sense, rather than living in an inexpensive area, residents should turn to places with more shops and restaurants, as it can largely save their commuting time, thus enhancing their overall life quality.

  ☆ 該段通過A 選項(xiàng)與C 選項(xiàng)的對比，說明A 的不足之處C可以 補(bǔ)足，于是選擇C

  With relatives living in the immediate vicinity, people, especially those who treasure kinship, may feel secure and supported, either because they may otherwise end up feeling torn or spending all of their vacation time shuttling back and forth to visit families. 【長句后，接短疑問句，為轉(zhuǎn)折做預(yù)告】However, can the close distance be counterproductive? The answer is surely positive. It is not unlikely that the young, living close to their immediate relatives, are bored by their parents’ idle chatter or aunts’ constant matchmaking. On the contrary, absence makes the heart grow fonder. Hence, it is better to live far away from those relatives than to live close to them.

  ☆ 先肯定B 的優(yōu)勢，即與親戚住的近feel supported and secure;再駁回：距離才能產(chǎn)生美呀，住的太近煩呀

  As a matter of fact, a wide range of shops and restaurants within walking distance is a major plus when people are choosing a place to live. If a person, particularly someone who is too busy to cook, needs to spend hours walking to a fast-food restaurant or to a convenience store, he or she may highly likely to get hangry on their way. The worst case is that he or she may become so exhausted after a long day work that they become reluctant to go out for food. As a result, their health is undermined, and their work productivity is reduced. After all, one cannot think well, sleep well and eat well unless one has dined well.

  ☆ 本段說明C選項(xiàng)(本文的選擇)的獨(dú)有好處

  At this point, it is quite clear that the proximity to shops and restaurants is decisive in finding a place to live, and the rest two factors play less crucial roles.